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    Question I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    I do know that something wrong in this sentences, but i don't know how to fix. Help me please!

    "However, the world goes on, and technologies improving with each passing year more and more! And here you can not do without expanding range of products."

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    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    Welcome to the forums, bozhko. Is this homework?

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    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    no, it's not. i used it in my speech. And it was on the slide of my presentation. I got a remark about this slide.

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    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    What was the remark?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    That the first sentence needs rewriting. And also in the second sentence one important element is missing.


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    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by bozhko View Post
    I do know that something wrong in this sentences, but i don't know how to fix. Help me please!

    "However, the world goes on, and technologies improving improve more and more with each passing year. more and more! And here you can not do without expanding range of products."
    I have corrected the first sentence. I don't know what you're trying to say with the second sentence. Can you try to write it differently to explain what you mean?
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    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    I mean, it's necessary to upgrade and expand the range of products by adding new elements. It's about competition in the product market.

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    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    What did you mean by "And here" at the start of that sentence?
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    #9

    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    like "in this case"

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    Re: I need an explanation and probably help with sentences

    In what case? Do you mean that these things need to be done because technology improves every year?
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