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    Please make the following beginning natural

    Please make the following beginning natural. Thank in advance.
    lThe pie charts compare the electricity production in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000 by five types of energy, i.e. coal, oil, natural gas, hydro power and nuclear power.

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    Re: Please make the following beginning natural

    The sentence is fine (except for the vertical slash before "The"). The "the" before "electricity" is not necessary.

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