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Is my sentence grammatically correct? Can the word "Resorting to" be replaced with 'exerting'? I am trying to reduce the word "to" in my sentence. Is there a way to improve it? Thanks in advance!
"A blind pursuit of a saying where "money create success" will leave one degenerated into obsession, resorting to illegitimate means to expand his wealth, while at the time creating a morally depraved world"
What I mean is if we blindly follow the saying where "the more money you earn, the more successful you are" we will end up to be obsessed with money.
Last edited by iereiy; 07-Apr-2015 at 16:00.