Student or Learner
Could you please check and correct my writing?
Does my text sound natural, if no, how can I fix it?
Work in the field engineer's thesis
Designed wireless and wired network infrastructure
Prepared the new architectural plans of the building along with plotted infrastructure of designed computer network
Conducted advanced signal attenuation and radio interference measurements
Preparing work stations and training staff
Administration of the Citrix XenServer virtualization platform
Responsibility for system security and configuration of system rules
Setting up network devices, workstations and servers
Network and application administration, problem detection and monitoring
Administration of servers, development and implementation of new services
Work placement at the Network Department [..]
Problem detection and monitoring, user support
Participated in project work on the A system
Administration of office network infrastructure and implementation of new services
Thank you in advance for your help.
"Prepared the new architectural plans of the building along with plotted infrastructure of designed computer network."
That one appears to be a bit of an overstatement. Your resume indicates that you are an IT person. But the preparation of architectural plans is the job of an architect.
Otherwise all of your points seem to be acceptable in a resume.
Last edited by probus; 11-Apr-2015 at 03:44.