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Junior Member
- Joined
- Mar 22, 2012
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Polish
- Home Country
- Poland
- Current Location
- Poland
Hi,
Could you please check and correct my writing?
Does my text sound natural, if no, how can I fix it?
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[..]
Work in the field engineer's thesis
• Designed wireless and wired network infrastructure
• Prepared the new architectural plans of the building along with plotted infrastructure of designed computer network
• Conducted advanced signal attenuation and radio interference measurements
[..]
Work placement
• Preparing work stations and training staff
• Administration of the Citrix XenServer virtualization platform
• Responsibility for system security and configuration of system rules
[..]
Work placement
• Setting up network devices, workstations and servers
• Network and application administration, problem detection and monitoring
• Administration of servers, development and implementation of new services
[..]
Work placement at the Network Department [..]
• Problem detection and monitoring, user support
• Participated in project work on the “A” system
• Administration of office network infrastructure and implementation of new services
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Thank you in advance for your help.
Could you please check and correct my writing?
Does my text sound natural, if no, how can I fix it?
----
[..]
Work in the field engineer's thesis
• Designed wireless and wired network infrastructure
• Prepared the new architectural plans of the building along with plotted infrastructure of designed computer network
• Conducted advanced signal attenuation and radio interference measurements
[..]
Work placement
• Preparing work stations and training staff
• Administration of the Citrix XenServer virtualization platform
• Responsibility for system security and configuration of system rules
[..]
Work placement
• Setting up network devices, workstations and servers
• Network and application administration, problem detection and monitoring
• Administration of servers, development and implementation of new services
[..]
Work placement at the Network Department [..]
• Problem detection and monitoring, user support
• Participated in project work on the “A” system
• Administration of office network infrastructure and implementation of new services
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Thank you in advance for your help.