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    Please check. Is it correct?

    Hi,
    Could you please check and correct my writing?
    Does my text sound natural, if no, how can I fix it?

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    • Ability to program in various languages such as: PHP, C++, C#, Python, SQL
    • Ability to configuration and administration Linux and Windows operating systems
    • Design and management of wired and wireless network infrastructure
    • Knowledge of modern technology used in computer industrial networks
    • Advanced ability to design wireless network with use of professional tools company
    Cisco and Fluke Networks AirMagnet Survey application
    • Experience use of tools supportive management network infrastructure, such as:
    MRTG, Nagios, Cisco Works, FireWall Analyzer, GFI LanGuard, AdRem NetCrunch
    • Ability to monitoring and configuration devices, inter alia, company Cisco Systems,
    workstations and servers used open source and Microsoft software
    • Ability to use the integrated development environment to accelerate and support
    design and creating applications process: Microsoft VisualStudio
    • Acquaintance of virtualization technologies VMWare and Citrix XenServer
    • Acquaintance of connected problems with operating systems, computer networks,
    security and techniques used successfully to protect IT resources
    • Knowledge of relational database, in this experience with MySQL
    • Experience use of software for the data-storing
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    Thank you in advance for your help.

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    Re: Please check. Is it correct?

    • Ability to program in various languages such as: PHP, C++, C#, Python, SQL
    • Ability to configuration configure and administration administer (or do you mean install?) Linux and Windows operating systems
    • Design and management of wired ireless network infrastructure
    • Knowledge of modern technology used in computer industrial networks
    • Advanced ability to design wireless network with the use of professional tools company
    Cisco and Fluke Networks AirMagnet Survey application
    • Experience in the use of tools supportive management network infrastructure, such as:
    MRTG, Nagios, Cisco Works, FireWall Analyzer, GFI LanGuard, AdRem NetCrunch
    • Ability to monitoring monitor and configuration configure devices, inter alia, company Cisco Systems,
    workstations and servers used open source and Microsoft software
    • Ability to use the integrated development environment to accelerate and support
    design and creating applications process: Microsoft VisualStudio
    • Acquaintance of with virtualization technologies VMWare and Citrix XenServer
    • Acquaintance of with connected problems connected with operating systems, computer networks,
    security and techniques used successfully to protect IT resources
    • Knowledge of relational database, in this experience with MySQL
    • Experience in the use of software for the data-storing

    not a teacher

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    Re: Please check. Is it correct?

    Those are all very good improvements. I've added a few more in blue.

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    • Ability to program in various languages, such as PHP, C++, C#, Python, and SQL
    • Ability to configuration configure and administration administer (or do you mean install?) Linux and Windows operating systems
    Ability to design and manage wired and wireless network infrastructure
    • Knowledge of modern technology used in computer industrial networks
    • Advanced ability to design wireless network with the use of professional tools company
    Cisco and Fluke Networks AirMagnet Survey application
    • Experience in the use of tools for supportive management network infrastructure, such as:
    MRTG, Nagios, Cisco Works, FireWall Analyzer, GFI LanGuard, and AdRem NetCrunch
    • Ability to monitoring monitor and configuration configure devices, inter alia [Does inter alia mean something, or is it a mistake?], company Cisco Systems, workstations [The comma separates Cisco Systems from workstations. Intentional?], and servers using open-source and Microsoft software
    • Ability to use the integrated development environment to accelerate and support the design and creation of applications process: Microsoft VisualStudio [The colon is confusing. What are you trying to say?]
    • Acquaintance of with virtualization technologies VMWare and Citrix XenServer
    • Acquaintance of with connected problems connected with operating systems, computer networks, security and techniques used successfully to protect IT resources
    • Knowledge of relational databases, including experience with MySQL
    • Experience in the use of software for the data-storing
    I hope that helps!
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: Please check. Is it correct?

    Is this sentence correct?

    Ability to monitor and configure devices among others the company's Cisco Systems, workstations and servers using open-source and Microsoft software.

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