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dkqmail

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Hi,
Could you please check and correct my writing?
Does my text sound natural, if no, how can I fix it?

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• Ability to program in various languages such as: PHP, C++, C#, Python, SQL
• Ability to configuration and administration Linux and Windows operating systems
• Design and management of wired and wireless network infrastructure
• Knowledge of modern technology used in computer industrial networks
• Advanced ability to design wireless network with use of professional tools company
Cisco and Fluke Networks AirMagnet Survey application
• Experience use of tools supportive management network infrastructure, such as:
MRTG, Nagios, Cisco Works, FireWall Analyzer, GFI LanGuard, AdRem NetCrunch
• Ability to monitoring and configuration devices, inter alia, company Cisco Systems,
workstations and servers used open source and Microsoft software
• Ability to use the integrated development environment to accelerate and support
design and creating applications process: Microsoft VisualStudio
• Acquaintance of virtualization technologies VMWare and Citrix XenServer
• Acquaintance of connected problems with operating systems, computer networks,
security and techniques used successfully to protect IT resources
• Knowledge of relational database, in this experience with MySQL
• Experience use of software for the data-storing
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Thank you in advance for your help.
 

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• Ability to program in various languages such as: PHP, C++, C#, Python, SQL
• Ability to [STRIKE]configuration[/STRIKE] configure and [STRIKE]administration[/STRIKE] administer (or do you mean install?) Linux and Windows operating systems
• Design and management of wired ireless network infrastructure
• Knowledge of modern technology used in computer industrial networks
• Advanced ability to design wireless network with the use of professional tools company
Cisco and Fluke Networks AirMagnet Survey application
• Experience in the use of tools supportive management network infrastructure, such as:
MRTG, Nagios, Cisco Works, FireWall Analyzer, GFI LanGuard, AdRem NetCrunch
• Ability to [STRIKE]monitoring[/STRIKE] monitor and[STRIKE] configuration[/STRIKE] configure devices, inter alia, company Cisco Systems,
workstations and servers used open source and Microsoft software
• Ability to use the integrated development environment to accelerate and support
design and creating applications process: Microsoft VisualStudio
• Acquaintance [STRIKE]of [/STRIKE] with virtualization technologies VMWare and Citrix XenServer
• Acquaintance [STRIKE]of [/STRIKE] with [STRIKE]connected[/STRIKE] problems connected with operating systems, computer networks,
security and techniques used successfully to protect IT resources
• Knowledge of relational database, in this experience with MySQL
• Experience in the use of software for the data-storing

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Those are all very good improvements. I've added a few more in blue.

• Ability to program in various languages, such as PHP, C++, C#, Python, and SQL
• Ability to [STRIKE]configuration[/STRIKE] configure and [STRIKE]administration[/STRIKE] administer (or do you mean install?) Linux and Windows operating systems
Ability to design and manage wired and wireless network infrastructure
• Knowledge of modern technology used in computer industrial networks
• Advanced ability to design wireless network with the use of professional tools company
Cisco and Fluke Networks AirMagnet Survey application
• Experience in the use of tools for supportive management network infrastructure, such as:
MRTG, Nagios, Cisco Works, FireWall Analyzer, GFI LanGuard, and AdRem NetCrunch
• Ability to [STRIKE]monitoring[/STRIKE] monitor and[STRIKE] configuration[/STRIKE] configure devices, inter alia [Does inter alia mean something, or is it a mistake?], [STRIKE]company[/STRIKE] Cisco Systems, workstations [The comma separates Cisco Systems from workstations. Intentional?], and servers using open-source and Microsoft software
• Ability to use the integrated development environment to accelerate and support the design and creation of applications process: Microsoft VisualStudio [The colon is confusing. What are you trying to say?]
• Acquaintance [STRIKE]of [/STRIKE] with virtualization technologies VMWare and Citrix XenServer
• Acquaintance [STRIKE]of [/STRIKE] with [STRIKE]connected[/STRIKE] problems connected with operating systems, computer networks, security and techniques used successfully to protect IT resources
• Knowledge of relational databases, including experience with MySQL
• Experience in the use of software for [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] data-storing

I hope that helps!
 

dkqmail

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Is this sentence correct?

Ability to monitor and configure devices among others the company's Cisco Systems, workstations and servers using open-source and Microsoft software.
 
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