me andmy friend and I want to go to work abroad. We are from Poland and we need a letter of recommendation in English. We don't know English very well, so we need help. Please, could someone check these references?
1). LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION
Mrs. Paulina [1, use a]
was workingworked in company during the holiday season from 1 July to 31 August in the years 2008-2010, and from 1 July to 30 September in years 2011-2014 as a sellersales assistant at in the grocery department inof Y . Her duties included commodity sale usingoperating the cash register, displaying products for sale exhibition of commodity, settlement ofassisting customers with purchases, tidying inthe store floor and inthe back room.
is the person whois competent and easily adapts to new circumstances. She is also outgoing and friendly at the same time. towards the environment. She is characterized byMrs. [1 use b] takes pride in herbeing scrupulous, engagementengaging and responsible. This has always been a reliable guarantee of her excellent work done. Thanks to her thecreativity, organizational skills and her ability to manage within stressful situations, she wasis consistently able to fulfill her duties. As she is a self-reliant person, she is an ideal employee, deeply involved in the company's activity. Her interpersonal skills make her great flagship inthe ideal staff member to deal ingswith clients.
I can recommend Mrs. Paulina [1 use b] for
eachany position that requires responsibility, initiative and experience in the industry.
2)LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION
Mrs. Paulina [1 use a]
was workingworked at  club from October 2014 to March 2015 as the position ofbartender. She was responsible for preparing and serving alcoholic and soft drinks, and toadvising the clientcustomers about the choice of available beverages, exhibition of commodityarranging the bottle display, and tidying inthe premises and in the back room.
Mrs. Paulina [1 use b] is responsible, scrupulous and competent. She efficiently handles
instressful situations. She is an outgoing person who is characterized by her punctuality, very goodexcellent organization of work and outstanding bartending skills. She is friendly, andhelpful forand supportive of other team members Sheand easily forms good relationships with her co-workers.
was workingworked with Mrs. Paulina [1 use b] as aher direct manager and I could observesupervised her daily tasks worksand can thoroughly vouch for her professionalism and meticulousness. her behaves in the different situations.I can recommend her to you as you Mrs. PaulinaI am sure her skills, qualifications and experience will be a great and valuable asset. helpful for you.
3). Mister Łukasz  was employed in club X  as a bartender from 09.2012 to 02.2015. His duties included preparing and
issuingserving alcoholic and soft drinks, customer service, product exposition, back room,advising customers about the choice of available beverages and taking care of the tidiness of the bar and office.
SinceIn April 2014, he took up dutiesthe role of bar manager, so his duties haveincreased by:to include opening and closing of the club local, club takings settlement, preparing the bar before opening, and training new employees.
He did his job faithfully and carefully
. Heand always was very punctual, resourceful as well as being highly skilled as a bartender. resistant to stress, and he had very good bartender skills.As bar manager, he was highly successful and very efficient. he properly managed the bar .During his work with us, he made aestablished very good relationships with his fellow workers.
1- In formal English, people are referred to by their surnames (or by their first names + surnames), not their first names.
a- Mrs. Paulina Smith (correct).
b- Mrs. Smith (correct).
Mrs. Paulina (incorrect).
2- Use the exact company, store or club name.
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