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“It is more important to be clever than beautiful or handsome”.
WritingWrite a letter to the editor of a local newspaper explaining whether you agree with this statement or not.
Recently, more and more teenagers are
performinghaving cosmetic surgery to be more beautiful or handsome. They believe that cleverness is notless important than external beauty. I am writing to express my disagreement with that view on their opinions, and I believe that cleverness is much more vital than appearance.
To begin with, intelligence is essential for learning at school. According to
therecent research from HK University, students with higher IQ levels usually get better academic results achievements. Therefore,Intelligent people need less study or revision time to familiarize themselves with knowledgethe concepts they have learnt, and thus they would have a higher chance of success to get successesin the publicexaminations. Pursuing excellent academic performance is always students’a top priority for many young people and cleverness can facilitate their learning so that they could be enrolled inget into university more easily easier. However, some students are just over focusingmore focused on their appearance ratherthan their intelligence, who wouldand as a result have inadequate time to study and lessfewer chances to get into theuniversity. As a result, it is hard for them to have a good future with lowtheir poor academic qualificationperformance in this highly competitive society.
Besides, external beauty
is unable to bedoesn't last forever unlike except forcleverness. Once people get older, their beauty starts to fade beautiful face would be disappeared. Although we could extend our external beauty by using make up making up, it is just temporary. However, cleverness is permanent and the knowledge and experience we gain in life, stays with us . If we get professional knowledge and wisdom, they will never leave you alone until you are dead. As a result, cleverness is a more useful quality than best choice for the Youngers but notbeauty.
Apart form this, intelligence could help you to get a great job. Despite the fact that some employers prefer
boss love tohiring handsome guys or pretty ladies to be their staff s, they would be invited out of the companies if they are not intelligent enough. Nevertheless,smart employees usually know how to get favors from their boss and have excellent working abilitiesachieve better results because they can always figure out some good idea for their companies. In fact, I believe that most companies would prefer to keep clever employees who couldhelp their companies to get considerableto succeed and increase their profit there.
Finally, some people claim
edthat good-looking people could easily find their love. It is somewhat true because they are more likely to look attractive to more people indeed attract opposite sex at the first time. Nevertheless, true love and a long-term relationship are based on your internal beauty and skills of getting along with your beloved one. A smart guysperson always knows their partner's feeling and knows how to make them happy with clever strategies inand various creative ways. Therefore, they never get bored with each other, and their relationship could thus keep inits passion.
the above-mentioned reasons show thatthe benefits of cleverness far outweigh the disadvantages of itthose of beauty. I hope that teenagers do not focus too much on their external beauty but on improving their intelligence by learning more.
Student or Learner