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    Post Can you check my letter please?

    Can you please check the following letter (grammer, vocabulary etc.):

    Hello PHET,


    I am writing to request further information about Clifton college. My son (14 years old) is interested in learning there next year. But before I send him there, I would like clarification of the following details:


    Firstly, are there pupils in the school who come from Israel? Because one of my biggest concerns is - how will my child survive alone in a foreign country? Do you know any pupils who came to the school from Israel without any family in the UK?


    Secondly, I am concerned about the language. Although our family lived in the UK for several years while he was young, he doesn't have excellent English.Do you think he can handle it? Based on previous cases?


    Yours sincerely,

    Ronit -------
    Last edited by roeyzaw1; 09-Apr-2015 at 15:56.

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    Re: Can you check my letter please?

    Hello PHET,


    I am writing to request for further information about Clifton college. My son (14 years old) is interested in learning to study there next year. But before I send him there, I would like clarification of the following details:


    Firstly, are there pupils in the school who come from Israel? Because one of my biggest concerns is - how will my child survive alone in a foreign country? Do you know any pupils who came has come to the school from Israel without any family in the UK?


    Secondly, I am concerned about him learning the language. Although our family lived in the UK for several years while he was young, he doesn't have excellent is not very good in English.Do you think he can handle it based on previous cases your experience?


    Yours sincerely,

    Ronit -------

    not a teacher

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    #3

    Re: Can you check my letter please?

    Thank you!!
    Last edited by emsr2d2; 12-Apr-2015 at 10:39. Reason: Removed unnecessary quote

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    Re: Can you check my letter please?

    There is no need to write a new post to say "Thank you". Simply click on the "Thank" button which appears in the bottom left-hand corner of any post you find helpful.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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