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  1. B45
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    Do all of these makes sense- I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay on my busine

    Do all of these makes sense-

    I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay on my business trip in Shanghai.

    VS

    I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay on my Shanghai business trip.

    VS

    I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay for my business in Shanghai.

    Are all three okay?

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    Re: Do all of these makes sense- I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay on my bu

    I would use "during" after "stay".

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    Re: Do all of these makes sense- I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay on my bu

    I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay during my business trip in Shanghai.

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    I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay during my Shanghai business trip.

    VS

    I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay during my business in Shanghai.

    Are all three good now?

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    Re: Do all of these makes sense- I'm looking for a nice clean place to stay on my bu

    The third would be better with "trip" after "business".

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