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    #1

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    Hi,

    Is the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually?

    Is "through" in a proper position following sentences?

    *This study presents an entropy generation analysis in isothermal flow through a monoplane wells turbine with the constant chord blades.

    Thanks.

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    #2

    Re: through

    Please correct the information in your profile.

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    #3

    Re: through

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    Please correct the information in your profile.
    Hi,

    What is your purpose?

    In fact, Entropy is generated and also, the flow goes through the turbine and contacts with the blade of turbine, makes entropy generates around the blade.

    Now how to write this sentence?


    Thanks for your help

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    #4

    Re: through

    We will not answer your questions until you have corrected the information in your profile.

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    #5

    Re: through

    You don't seem to understand (or be interested in) what bhaisahab has asked you to do twice.

    Your member profile shows that you are a native Japanese speaker and that you are currently located in Japan. That does not appear to be true. Please give true information and then we will think about answering your question.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #6

    Re: through

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    You don't seem to understand (or be interested in) what bhaisahab has asked you to do twice.

    Your member profile shows that you are a native Japanese speaker and that you are currently located in Japan. That does not appear to be true. Please give true information and then we will think about answering your question.
    Incidentally, I understood!!!

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    #7

    Re: through

    Thank you for correcting your information, Ali.

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    #8

    Re: through

    Quote Originally Posted by ali_dd View Post
    *This study presents an entropy generation analysis in [of?] isothermal flow through a monoplane Wells [?] turbine with the constant chord blades.
    That's a guess. I have no idea what it means.
    "through" sounds right.

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    #9

    Re: through

    Quote Originally Posted by Raymott View Post
    That's a guess. I have no idea what it means.
    "through" sounds right.
    Hi,

    Wells turbine is a kind of turbine.

    In fact, there is a fluid and and a turbine that entropy is generated by turbine.

    In other words, fluid flow goes through the turbine and contacts with the blade of turbine that these make entropy is generated around the blade. Here, fluid flow is a isothermal flow because there is not finite temperature difference( one of irreversibility factors).

    Now, Would it be better if the first post'sentence is written like this :

    This study analyses the entropy of isothermal flow which is generated by monoplane wells turbine with the constant chord blades.

    Thanks,

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    #10

    Re: through

    The latest version sounds better.
    "Wells" should be capitalized.
    "Which is" could be omitted.
    There should not be a "the" before "constant chord blades".

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