I understood everything you said, but there are some problems with the length of the vowels and the stress on the final syllable, which is far too long. This is also noticeable in words of one syllable like, 'is', 'shares', 'north', 'west', 'lies' and so on.
The 'o' in 'Scotland' and 'covers' is incorrectly pronounced. The word 'includes' is very strange. 'Scilly' is pronounced as 'silly'.
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