See above for my suggested amendments to your letter and corrections to the first part of your post.Hello, I have some skill in php language, but my English
languageis far from good. I have never lived in an English-speaking citiescountry so I know (no comma here) that I can't write a good letter. Most of the timestime, I think my sentences feel "foreign". , I think.
Now I have to write letters to some tourist offices, and I don't want to
besound too "foreign".
I would be really glad (no comma here) if you could check this letter:
First, let me introduce myself. My name is XYZ and I work with COMPANY-NAME. I would like to
pay/draw your attention to our website (by) providing you with free possibility/the opportunity to introduce/presentadvertise your region for free. /the region represented by you.
WEBSITE-NAME is a brand new website. The site is primarily a free travel blog where anyone can share
his/hertheir travel experiences, can showgive details of the sights located around his/hertheir home, canprepare maps or canupload other travel-related articles. We sort the articles based on travel categories and regions and our long-term goal is to establish a database where visitors can get useful information on numerous touristicaltourist possibilities all over the world.
We would be
glad/pleased ifvery happy for your region / the region represented by youto appearsappear on our website. In caseIf you are interested, in the appereance possibility on our website,you can review itview our website via this link.
After a brief registration process, you can
introduceadvertise your region on our site. You can also upload photos, share yourlinks and attach maps. , as well.
I really hope that our website
couldarouses your interest. ItI would be grateful if you would write a blog on WEBSITE-NAME.
are lookinglook forward to hearing from you soon. Should you have any questions regarding the website, please feel free to contact us.
So this would be the letter. (?)All unnecessary.