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    #1

    correct me

    Is the text below correct and natural?

    “I wouldn’t like to describe myself because I wish you will just know me by talk and write with me. I also think it takes time to really know somebody that’s why I try to not judge anybody. But I will try to write something more about me, soon…

    You’re welcome to write to me…”

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    #2

    Re: correct me

    Quote Originally Posted by kompstar View Post
    Is the text below correct and natural?

    “I don't want to to describe myself because I want you to just get to know me by talking with me and writing. I also think it takes time to really know somebody. That’s why I try to not judge anybody. But I will try to write something more about me soon.

    You’re welcome to write to me.
    Hope that helps!
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    #3

    Re: correct me

    Another suggestion:


    “I think I don't need to describe myself, because you will gradually know me through speaking with and writing to me. I also believe that it takes time to really know somebody, but I will try to write something more about myself soon…


    You’re welcome to write to me…”

    Not a teacher.

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    #4

    Re: correct me

    Oh, and one other thing:

    Quote Originally Posted by kompstar View Post
    ... I will try to write something more about myself soon….
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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