I need help writing a letter to a director to consider my application after the dead line. Pleas help!!! This what I have so far
I am writing to ask for consideration of my application intothe License Practical Nursing Program in Durant. I arrived at KiamichiTechnology center twelve minutes after five. I got a chance to speak to areceptionist and was told they were no longer accepting applications. I acceptall responsibility arriving late to hand in my application. And I would like toask you for consideration.
I have been a Certified Nursing Assistant for thirteenyears.I have experience working innursing homes; med/surg, telemetry, orthopedics in a hospital. And for the lasttwo years Iíve been working in hospice. My CPR certification is currently up todate.
Iím willing to find a testing center in my area and take therequired sections of the Hesi entrance exam.
Thank you kindly for taking the time to read my letter. Ihope you are willing to give me a chance by considering my application.
Have you read through the draft yourself?
For a start, make the text easier to read for the reader.
Many pairs of words are stuck together.
Space out the paragraphs properly.
Official letters should have a title.
Do not use abbreviations.
I suggest you look into the above and repost the letter in Writing & Editing section of the forum.
not a teacher
Last edited by tedmc; 16-Apr-2015 at 03:55.