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    China products are worthy for the prices rated - Grammar check

    The attached picture was one my facebook posts in the last week. I replied as below. Could you please check for any grammatical errors?

    Please note that Japan products also treated the same way before Second World War. You may witness where they are today. China products are worthy for the prices rated. Commenting on China products in this way not acceptable. They are a World leader, by a mile! I am not a communist.Click image for larger version. 

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    Last edited by Kumar Nadimuthu; 16-Apr-2015 at 19:46.
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    Re: China products are worthy for the prices rated - Grammar check

    In your piece, you have tried to use "China" and "Japan" as adjectives. They don't work like that here. If you knew a person from China, how would you describe him/her?
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: China products are worthy for the prices rated - Grammar check

    Could you please check?

    Please note that Japan products also treated the same way before Second World War. You may come across how those are good at. China products are worthy for the prices rated. Commenting on China products in this way not acceptable. They are a world leader, by a mile! I am not a Chinese.
    Last edited by Kumar Nadimuthu; 16-Apr-2015 at 22:19.
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    Re: China products are worthy for the prices rated - Grammar check

    The contents of post #2 still apply. Look at these examples.

    I am from England.
    I am an England woman.
    I am an English woman.

    Now see if you can apply the same logic to things like "China products" and "Japan products".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: China products are worthy for the prices rated - Grammar check

    Could you please again?

    Please note that Japanese products also treated the same way before Second World War. You may come across how those are good at. Chinese products are worthy for the prices rated. Commenting on Chinese products in this way not acceptable. World leader, by a mile! I am not a Chinese.
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    Re: China products are worthy for the prices rated - Grammar check

    Quote Originally Posted by Kumar Nadimuthu View Post
    Could you please check it now? again?

    Please note that Japanese products were also treated the same way before ​the Second World War but You may come across I'm sure you know how good those they are. good at. Chinese products are worthy worth for the prices rated charged. Commenting on Chinese products in this way is not acceptable. They are a world leader, by a mile! I am not a Chinese.
    See above for my suggested corrections.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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