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    Please, fix errors in mini-article about seo-optimization.

    seo-optimization - this concept appeared in the United States. Country United States has a big internet business. Many years, I tried to understand seo-optimization, and I was able to understand it. I was able to move the my site to top10 of search engine "Google". I could show "how i move sites to top10 of "Google"", but is take up very long time.

    Please fix my mini-text, and fix errors. My first language is Russian.

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    Re: Please, fix errors in mini-article about seo-optimization.

    SEO stands for search engine optimization. It should be capitalized and does not need a '-optimization' again.
    What you mean by "move the my site to top10 of search engine "Google" ?

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    Last edited by tedmc; 17-Apr-2015 at 07:59.

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    Re: Please, fix errors in mini-article about seo-optimization.

    What you mean by "move the my site to top10 of search engine "Google" ?
    I mean "increase position of site on Google search results".

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    Re: Please, fix errors in mini-article about seo-optimization.

    seo-optimization - this concept appeared in the United States. Country United States has a big internet business. Many years, I tried to understand seo-optimization, and I was able to understand it. I was able to move the my site to top10 of search engine "Google". I could show "how i move sites to top10 of "Google"", but is take up very long time.


    The concept of SEO started in the United States, the country with the biggest internet business. I have tried to learn the concept of SEO for many years and managed to understand it. With that, I was able raise my website ranking to the top 10 of "Google" search engine, though it took a long time.

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    Re: Please, fix errors in mini-article about seo-optimization.

    I've writed:
    I tried
    You've writed:
    I have tried
    Is my text grammatically correct?
    seo-optimization - this concept appeared in the United States. Country United States has a big internet business. Many years, I have tried to understand seo-optimization, and I was able to understand it. I was able to move the my site to top10 of search engine "Google". I could show "how i move sites to top10 of "Google"", but is take up very long time.
    Last edited by jeyzzz; 17-Apr-2015 at 09:10.

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    Re: Please, fix errors in mini-article about seo-optimization.

    I write (present)
    I wrote (past)
    I have written (perfect) No 'writed'
    'I have tried' sounds better though 'I tried' is also correct.
    For many years... - you need a preposition

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