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    This was a very fun but tough sword fight as it was one versus dozens and the costume

    An actor talking about a set he was on:

    This was a very fun but tough sword fight as it was one versus dozens and the costume, although looked amazing was very hard to move in.


    Is this sentence correctly punctuated? Shouldn't there be a comma after dozens?

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    Re: This was a very fun but tough sword fight as it was one versus dozens and the cos

    Maybe, but there must definitely be one after 'amazing', since that's a parenthetical phrase (if written correctly):
    "... the costume, although it looked amazing, was very hard to move in."

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    Re: This was a very fun but tough sword fight as it was one versus dozens and the cos

    Not a teacher.

    I agree with Raymott.
    Additionally, I believe that there should be a comma between 'dozens' and 'and'. Without comma it sounds like a fight between 'one' and his opponent "dozens and the costume". Although it can be ruled out by absurdity and that the last part of the sentence rules that interpretation out, one comma more makes it more easy to read.

    "This was a very fun but tough sword fight as it was one versus dozens, and the costume, although looked amazing, was very hard to move in"

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