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    Please help me with these sentences .

    Hello Folks,

    Here I'm posting sentences I have problem with . Any help would be appreciated.

    And the sentences are:-

    1. Your food is packed and you can take it and eat it(or have that food) later in the day .

    2. I prefered other book so that I can solve more variety of questions.

    3. As the "day proceeds" I worked on other things (Is it refer to "as the day goes")

    4. After finishing my homework I decided that I should do some fun and I watched a movie.

    5. soldier was good at hunting terrorists.

    6. He blew many people with his sniper shot.

    7. He always craved to do something for his country.

    9. He made his target to hunt that sniper man and he hunted him down.

    10. as I was watching movie I had my dinner inbetween.

    11. If I'll be consistent, I'll definitely improve my skills.

    12. It doesn't help much if you are not enjoying what you are reading.

    13. They both were killed by a person to which they were helping to.


    Cheers,

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    #2

    Re: Please help me with these sentences .

    We don't do students' homework, Jack.

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    Re: Please help me with these sentences .

    And even if it wasn't homework, it's completely unclear what your "problems" are with them. When you come back to ask us non-homework-related questions, you will need to be much more specific.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please help me with these sentences .

    Hi Emsr2 & Rover,

    This is not my homework, I was just writing about the movie I watched and while I was writing I faced problem making these sentences. so I put them here to check if they are right or wrong or can we improvise these sentences. ?

    That is it . :)

    Regards,

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    Re: Please help me with these sentences .

    I think you mean "improve", not "improvise".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please help me with these sentences .

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    I think you mean "improve", not "improvise".
    Yes , You are right @ emsr2d2. :) Improve not improvise.

    also, please take a look at 5th sentence, is it right?
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