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    #1

    insecure for personal information

    However, e-commerce can be insecure for personal information and sometimes more expensive.

    Does the sentence above make any sense?
    Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.

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    #2

    Re: insecure for personal information

    It would make more sense if we could see the previous sentence.

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    #3

    Re: insecure for personal information

    insecure for personal information
    This doesn't sound very natural to me and I can find many examples of it in use. Something like e-commerce is a security risk for personal information would work better IMO. And, as Rover_KE has pointed out, we need more context to know what it might be more expensive than.

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    #4

    Re: insecure for personal information

    It's difficult to provide the whole context, because it's an extract of the conclusion from my essay.

    I'd like to say "E-commerce might be a risk for personal information and online shopping can be more expensive than offline."
    Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.

    Not a teacher nor a native speaker.

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