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    kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

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    Re: kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

    dealing with internal and external people of all management levels - what do you mean by that?

    to open up the long term service agreement to negotiation
    negotiate with

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    May I know what thermal and offshore wind business is ?

    not a teacher

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    Re: kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

    Hi tedmc,

    Thank you for your feedback.

    With internal and external people I mean colleagues and counterparties. Perhaps this is a typical example of interference from my native language.

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    Re: kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

    How about: Whilst dealing with colleagues, clients and counterparts of all management levels on a variety of projects...?

    You have not answered my question on thermal and offshore wind business. Are they to do with energy sources?

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    Re: kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

    https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/t...-for-me-thanks

    Please check it for me :) Mr.tedmc. I'm sorry about this spam :( I'm going to have Ielts Exam next months. huhu

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    Re: kindly requested: cover letter grammar and style check

    [QUOTE=tedmc;1148763]How about: Whilst dealing with colleagues, clients and counterparts of all management levels on a variety of projects...?

    You have not answered my question on thermal and offshore wind business. Are they to do with energy sources?[/QUOTE]

    Yes :)

    Thank you for your suggestion!

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