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    The Internet has changed our life in many ways

    The Internet has changed our life in many ways and one of them is the way we do our shopping.

    Does the sentence above sound natural? Personally, I don't like a repetition of the word "way".
    What would you say?
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    Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.

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    Re: The Internet has changed our life in many ways

    I would say "The internet has changed our lives in many ways and one of them is how we shop".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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