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  1. Boris Tatarenko's Avatar
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    form our own opinion [stylistics]

    It is important to explore the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping to form our own opinion.

    It's the last sentence of the introduction in my essay (advantages and disadvantages). I know it's grammatically correct but what about sense? Do we really need to form an opinion? Is it a purpose of such kinds of work?

    If you need the whole introduction to understand whether the last sentence fits or not, I can post it.
    Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.

    Not a teacher nor a native speaker.

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    Re: form our own opinion [stylistics]

    I would end it with "... in order to form our own opinion" or "before forming an opinion".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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