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It is important to explore the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping to form our own opinion.
It's the last sentence of the introduction in my essay (advantages and disadvantages). I know it's grammatically correct but what about sense? Do we really need to form an opinion? Is it a purpose of such kinds of work?
If you need the whole introduction to understand whether the last sentence fits or not, I can post it.
Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.
Not a teacher nor a native speaker.
I would end it with "... in order to form our own opinion" or "before forming an opinion".
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.