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    While observing the above, ..... requirements continue to be observed

    Hello again!

    While observing the above, care should be taken that when the ERRV is of such a size that FRC are carried in lieu of lifeboats under equivalence clauses, that LSA legislative requirements continue to be observed.

    In my opinion, the whole sentence can be rearranged and changed as follows:

    At the same time as sticking to the above, care should be taken that LSA legislative requirements continue to be observed when the ERRV is of such a size that FRC are carried in lieu of lifeboats under equivalent clauses,

    It seems to me that this sentence is clearer.

    What is your opinion?

    Thank you.

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    Re: While observing the above, ..... requirements continue to be observed

    The original is better. The order is more natural. And "sticking to" is too informal.

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