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    Hi,

    I am writing a paper and want to select a good title for paper. This paper describes Local entropy generation rates( is a parameter) related to viscous dissipation around rotor blades of wells turbine (3 dimensional) and this parameter is compared with first law efficiency of thermodynamics. In fact, when entropy generation increased, first law efficiency decreases.

    I selected a title for expressed paper. this title is as follows:

    3-D Analysis of Entropy Generation due to Viscous Dissipation in a monoplane Wells Turbine

    I want to use "first law efficiency" in this title and also, above words is used. Can it be?

    I am grateful from your guide.


    Best,

    Ali

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    Re: Title

    Few teachers here are familiar with scientific usage.

    Send me a private message and I will send you an email address that you can send the draft paper to. Then I'll be able to help you more.

    None of us can guess what the title should be until we see the whole draft paper.
    Last edited by probus; 23-Apr-2015 at 05:51.

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    Re: Title

    I had two suggestions. please, give your opinion.

    *3-D Analysis of Entropy Generation due to Viscous Dissipation in a monoplane Wells Turbine:Based on influence on first law of thermodynamics

    *3-D Analysis of Entropy Generation due to Viscous Dissipation in a monoplane Wells Turbine:comparison between entropy generation and first law efficiency

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    Re: Title

    Please take probus up on his very helpful offer.

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