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    Exclamation With regarding to

    Hi,

    Are the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually. If these are not , kindly suggest ways to make it clearer.

    I want to write the following sentences in abstract of paper.

    *With regarding to first law efficiency of thermodynamics variation which depending on the entropy generation, the point of minimum entropy generation coincides with the point of maximum first law efficiency of thermodynamics.

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    Re: With regarding to

    Are the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually?

    *As a result, first law efficiency of thermodynamics variation is dependent to the entropy generation, so that the point of minimum entropy generation coincides with the point of maximum first law efficiency of thermodynamics

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    #3

    Re: With regarding to

    Hi

    here is the correct version:

    Is the following sentence correct grammatically and conceptually?

    *As a result, first law efficiency of thermodynamics variation is dependent on entropy generation, so that the point of minimum entropy generation coincides with the point of maximum first law efficiency of thermodynamics.



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    Last edited by Rover_KE; 25-Apr-2015 at 08:54.

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