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Is the bold sentence correct grammatically?
Also, entropy generation factors around the blade are investigated. All of these factors are detected by viscous entropy generation distributions, which record a substantial increase of the viscous component of local entropy generation rate equation. Any entropy generation analysis improvement on Wells turbine must take these factors into consideration.
I think the phrase "take these factors into consideration" is correct, though I'm a bit confused about "entropy generation analysis improvement".
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