This is first time I am joining this site. I am Pakistani and work as a Secretary in Dubai. Some times I come across sentences which I feel are not very much suitable and can be better written.
Please correct the following sentences:
1- Kindly furnish us the details asked to enable us finalize the deed.
or Kindly furnish us the details asked enable us to finalize the deed.
2- We thank you for your letter reference xyz/045/06 dated 19/05/2006 for inviting us for the above mentioned project. We hereby confirm our willingness to participate in the same tender.
I'd say 'requested' not 'asked' and it is 'to enable'
2- for inviting- remove 'for'