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  1. Newbie
    Interested in Language
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • Urdu
      • Home Country:
      • Pakistan
      • Current Location:
      • United Arab Emirates

    • Join Date: May 2006
    • Posts: 1

    Hi Teacher & All Members

    This is first time I am joining this site. I am Pakistani and work as a Secretary in Dubai. Some times I come across sentences which I feel are not very much suitable and can be better written.
    Please correct the following sentences:
    1- Kindly furnish us the details asked to enable us finalize the deed.
    or Kindly furnish us the details asked enable us to finalize the deed.
    2- We thank you for your letter reference xyz/045/06 dated 19/05/2006 for inviting us for the above mentioned project. We hereby confirm our willingness to participate in the same tender.
    Fakhar Butt

  2. Editor,
    English Teacher
    • Member Info
      • Native Language:
      • British English
      • Home Country:
      • UK
      • Current Location:
      • Laos

    • Join Date: Nov 2002
    • Posts: 60,154

    Re: Hi Teacher & All Members

    I'd say 'requested' not 'asked' and it is 'to enable'
    2- for inviting- remove 'for'

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