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    motivation letter grammar and spelling

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    I need some help with my motivation letter ..grammar and spelling again ... Please if you can help me and correct my mistakes I would be deeply appreciate!!!



    When I was choosing the direction of my education in 2000 it was important for me to choose a profession that would allow me to continue studying foreign languages and also to understand how our society, organizations, companies and individuals operate from the economic aspect worldwide. So I have decided to study Economics with a Specialization in the International Economy. After graduating University I was working in the international payment department of some Russian bank, in the private international companies and at list several years ago I have started to work in human resources consulting area in American company in Moscow.

    Now globalization is an important part of any business development and everyday in my work I am a part of some cross-cultural environment: companies and management from different part of the world acting together in a various way, communicating and building their business strategies. As a consultant who participates in the human resources development projects and international recruitment I need to be in a charge of different business topics, be able to communicate with our clients effectively and to fulfill their demands correctly. It is very important for me to do properly selection and development of personnel as well as coaching and communication. Each company is defined by corporate culture and people who are working within. That is why I should be able to find a personnel with unique human skills able to work and to be a part of some existing team. During all my work I felt the lack of some psychological knowledge that is why I started my second education in Russia in the area of Psychology. I did not graduate in Psychology because in 2014 I relocated to Germany with my German husband who wanted to live in his homeland.

    My professional goal is to work as a recruitment specialist and career development consultant. Pursuing a research-oriented masters program is a necessary step in order to achieve this goal. This program supposed to develop skills in areas such as organizational, social and consumer psychology, behavioral economics, change management and organizational development, advanced research methods and intercultural management, which are really core for me.

    Ultimately, I have chosen the ____ University of Applied Sciences because Students of your University advised me. They emphasize that the academic aspects of studying process are very good and high profile professors and researchers are working. Also a great advantage was that teaching method is very effective and modernized focused on practical topics.

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    Re: motivation letter grammar and spelling

    When I was choosing deciding the direction of my education in 2000, it was important for me to choose a profession course that would allow me to continue studying foreign languages and also to understand how our society, organizations, companies and individuals operate from an economic perspective. from the economic aspect worldwide. So I have decided to study economics with a specialization in the international economy. After graduating from university, I was working worked in the international payment department of some a well-known Russian bank, in the private international companies and at list for the past several years ago I have started to work in human resources consulting area in with an American company in Moscow.

    Now Globalization is has become an important part of any business development, and everyday in my at work I am a part of some cross-cultural interaction environment: usually involving companies and management from different parts of the world acting together in a various ways, communicating and building their business strategies. As a consultant who participates in the human resources development projects and international recruitment, I need to be in a charge of different business areas topics, be able to communicate with our clients effectively and to deal with their requests appropriately. fulfill their demands correctly. It is very important for me to do properly selection and development of personnel as well as coaching and communication. Another important part of my job involves the selection, induction, training and coaching of newly recruited staff members. I firmly believe that a Each company is defined by its corporate culture and its people. who are working within. That is why I should be able to find a usually seek personnel with unique human skills able to work with and to be a part of some an existing team. Nevertheless, During all my work at some point I felt the lack of some I needed a greater and more in-depth understanding of human psychology psychological knowledge that which is why I started my second course of tertiary education in Russia in the area of psychology. However, I did not graduate in psychology because in 2014 I relocated to Germany with my German husband who wanted to live in his homeland.

    My professional goal is to work as a recruitment specialist and career development consultant. Pursuing a research-oriented masters program is a necessary step in order to achieve this goal. This program supposed to A master's program would help me develop skills in areas such as organizational, social and consumer psychology, behavioral economics, change management and organizational development, advanced research methods and intercultural management, which are really core for me.

    Ultimately, I have chosen the ____ University of Applied Sciences based on the strong recommendations of many students and graduates from your university, especially regarding the modern teaching approaches, the highly-acclaimed academic staff and the focus on providing the students with the necessary practical skills and experience to help them succeed in their respective careers. because Students of your University advised me. They emphasize that the academic aspects of studying process are very good and high profile professors and researchers are working. Also a great advantage was that teaching method is very effective and modernized focused on practical topics.

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