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    Are these correct: Can I bring it to you tonight and pick up my things too? VS Can

    Are these correct:

    Can I bring it to you tonight and pick up my things too?

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    Can I bring it to you and pick up my things tonight?

    Used in conversation.

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    Re: Are these correct: Can I bring it to you tonight and pick up my things too? VS

    You need a comma before too.

    A true stickler would also advise you to use may instead of can. May asks for permission, can asks about physical possibility.
    I'm not a teacher. I speak American English. I've tutored writing at the University of Southern Maine and have done a good deal of copy editing and writing, occasionally for publication.

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    Re: Are these correct: Can I bring it to you tonight and pick up my things too? VS

    'Can I bring it to you tonight and pick up my things at the same time?'

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    Re: Are these correct: Can I bring it to you tonight and pick up my things too? VS

    I would not place a comma before "too". "Can" works perfectly well, particularly in conversation.

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