Please check and improve my write

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Hello, Zaaaaa!

It looks like a teacher has already corrected your paper. Have you asked your teacher to explain?

Can you tell us some of your questions?
 

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Hello, Zaaaaa!

It looks like a teacher has already corrected your paper. Have you asked your teacher to explain?

Can you tell us some of your questions?

yes I asked.But,I will take a very critical note of this essay. That's why I need to help.In fact, I always improve essay myself.As ı said,if it is not important, I don't want to help you :)
 
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