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    Because of the judgments

    Hi,

    Could anybody tell me If the sentence below are grammatically correct? They seem to me awkward.

    I also would like to know what the word "it" refers to.



    Because one of the important judgments based on ‘observed data risk degree’ is whether the observed data exceed the flood control standard or the limit on t
    he structure strength or stability, as well as whether the variation regulation of observed data is normal, it contains the risk measure component. From this point, the top ‘nature risk degree’ based on the bottom ‘observed risk degree’ also contains risk measurement in evaluation.


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    Re: Because of the judgments

    Please state the source and author of your quotation.

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    #3

    Re: Because of the judgments

    The source is an article on "dam operation risk degrees" written by chinese authors.

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    Re: Because of the judgments

    Please name the authors and the exact title (remember that a title should be capitalised). You must credit people with the words they have written.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Because of the judgments

    You are right.

    The title of the article is "Assessment model of dam operation risk based on monitoring data" and the authors are "WU ZhongRu, SU HuaiZhi & GUO HaiQing".

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