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    #1

    Thank you

    Dear ........,

    At first, I would like to thank you for added me to your professional network on LinkedIn.





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    Re: Thank you

    Welcome to the forum.

    Have you a question for us?

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    Re: Thank you

    Quote Originally Posted by mhanafy View Post
    Dear ........,
    At first, I would like to thank you for added me to your professional network on LinkedIn.
    Change "At first" to "First" or "Firstly", and change "added" to "adding."

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    Re: Thank you

    change "added" to "adding."
    Or for having added, though adding works better.

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