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It is visible how Andrew’s attitude towards his job and the potential assassination attempt is changing as we are reading further
I want to say that the more we read the more we see how Andrew's attitude to those things is changing. Is it OK?
Please, correct all my mistakes. I should know English perfectly and if you show me my mistakes I will achieve my dream a little bit faster. A lot of thanks.
Not a teacher nor a native speaker.
How about As we read further, it becomes clear how....