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    Please take a look at my writing at your convenience: One sure thing I will miss abo

    Please take a look at my writing at your convenience:

    One sure thing I will miss about China is the hot pot! There's just no hot pot restaurant in LA that can match even the most ordinary hot pot restaurant in China. Maybe that's why I always go on a hot pot binge when I'm in Shanghai. Believe it or not this is my third time having hot pot in five days...

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    Re: Please take a look at my writing at your convenience: One sure thing I will miss

    Quote Originally Posted by Batman45 View Post
    Please take a look at my writing at your convenience:

    One sure thing I will definitely miss about China is the hot pot! There's just no hot pot restaurant in LA that can match even the most ordinary hot pot restaurant eatery in China. Maybe that's why I always go on a hot pot binge when I'm in Shanghai. Believe it or not, this is my third time having hot pot in five days.

    How is my writing?
    Note: The last sentence would be OK if you were relating the above in a hot pot restaurant. Otherwise, you can say: "Believe it or not, I've had hot pot for three of the last five days."

    Personal comment: I know exactly what you mean. Hot pot in China is absolutely delicious.

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