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    #1

    Please correct me

    Pls correct me,

    Dear Sir,

    This is to bring to your kind attention that we have identified a misplaced tracking device, which was allocated to plate No 1243. The vehicle has been located at the garage, since 4 months with an engine trouble and the system does not have any last functioned location with the discontinued power to tracking unit.



    Your prompt attention to this matter is greatly appreciated.
    Last edited by Rover_KE; 18-May-2015 at 08:20.

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    #2

    Re: Pls correct me

    It is impossible to correct what you write without understanding what you are writing about.
    What is 'misplaced tracking device' and how is it related to the vehicle?
    What do you mean by 'allocated to plate 1243', 'last functioned location' and discontinued power to tracking unit'?

    not a teacher

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    #3

    Re: Pls correct me

    Hi, tks for the interest of helping me and could you give your mail id, then i can explain with the details.

    Regards

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    #4

    Re: Pls correct me

    Quote Originally Posted by nuwancha View Post
    Hi, tks thanks for the interest of in helping me. Could you give your mail id email address, then I can explain with the details?

    Regards.
    Note my corrections above. Don't use non-standard abbreviations or textspeak on this forum - "tks" is not a word. It's "thanks". We do not allow email addresses to be given on the forum. You need to answer tedmc's queries publicly in this thread.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    #5

    Re: Please correct me

    Thank for creating thread and it also help to get proper valid answer.

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