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    #1

    lie and stealthiness

    Would you please correct me if I have written the sentences and words incorrectly?

    Taking into account the people's state of the household , we should conduct research during which faithfulness of the individual people in exchange for one another will be detected. Let not to say, the effect of lie and stealthiness in demoralizing springs and harming( hurting) children's manners(behaviours) is crystal clear.


    By this "the people's state of the household", I mean: the situation, circumstance, or mood which household or each of the members of household have.


    By "conduct research", I mean: we are going to do research

    What kind of research? the research through which we will find how faithfulness are the people to one another.

    Excuse me for asking such a long question and being rudeness. Here, I have not any access to a proper resource to give an answer.


    UPDATED:
    First thank you so much. I really do appreciate your taking the time.


    1. No, faithfulness to one another among members of a family or exactly a household.
    2. I am so sorry I meant offspring
    3.Although they might mean the same thing, I am wondering which one or what is a just formal phrase to say the red one?--as they are somehow just informal: "Let not to say":It has to be mentioned that ...We shouldn't miss the fact that ... It goes without saying that.....

    4. I f we would like to add the phrase during which to the italic part, so, what to do?

    Taking into account the circumstances of each household, we should research each person’s attitude to fidelity.
    The negative effects on children that comes from the lies and deceit carried out by their parents.


    I have made some changes.

    And, would you please show/ help me if we would like to rephrase the sentence as following?

    The effect of lie and deceit in in demoralizing springs and harming( hurting) children's manners(behaviours) is crystal clear.


    Many thanks
    Last edited by nima_ever_learner; 19-May-2015 at 20:00.

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    #2

    Re: lie and stealthiness

    Your text is very difficult to understand and follow.
    Are you talking about faithfulness in marriage?
    What do you mean by "springs?"
    "Let not to say" is not a natural or grammatical phrase in English.

    Can you rewrite it in simpler language?

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