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  1. B45
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    Please take a look at this short paragraph. In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best come

    Please take a look at this short paragraph.

    In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best comedic movie villian of ALL time, aside from Ken Jeong's character in The Hang Over trilogy. I dont remember a time where I laughed harder and louder at the movies than when I watched the Austin Powers trilogy. I really hope they make another Austin Powers movie. I miss the 90s!

  2. B45
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    Re: Please take a look at this short paragraph. In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best

    Other than don't, everything else is okay?

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    Re: Please take a look at this short paragraph. In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best

    Quote Originally Posted by Batman45 View Post
    Other than don't, is everything else is okay?
    You need a comma after "opinion". You have misspelt "villain" in your piece. I would use "I don't remember a time when ...".

    Everything else is OK.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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    Re: Please take a look at this short paragraph. In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best

    I would use "I don't remember a time when ...".

    So, is I don't remember a time where - wrong?

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    Re: Please take a look at this short paragraph. In my opinion Dr. Evil was the best

    You'll hear it but it makes more sense for me to use "when" if you are referring to time.
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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