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    #1

    Need help..

    After many frustrated attempts. I ended up with a big hole in my pocket, but it was nothing compared to the hole it left in my pride.

    However, during these arduous years, time was my soothing healer.

    One probable solution, taking stock and calling it quits, eluded me from the start, but I was adamant to soldier on.


    (Are these three sentences right?

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    #2

    Re: Need help..

    Are you talking about gambling?

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    #3

    Re: Need help..

    No...my loss in business.

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    #4

    Re: Need help..

    Your sentences work for me.

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    #5

    Re: Need help..

    Please assist...

    This unanticipated turn of event helped me meet life’s challenges head-on.

    Having overcome some of my life’s struggles, I’m compelled to say that I’ve indeed outdone myself.


    (Please help me rectify the errors)

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    #6

    Re: Need help..

    You should change "event" to "events".

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    #7

    Re: Need help..

    Any flaws??

    From the beginning, I was relentlessly mocked by failure.

    To make matters worse, the constant reminder and bickering from my ‘friends’ and next of kin made me buckle under pressure.

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