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    I was relentlessly mocked by failure

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    From the beginning, I was relentlessly mocked by failure.

    To make matters worse, the constant reminder and bickering from my ‘friends’ and next of kin made me buckle under pressure.

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    Re: I was relentlessly mocked by failure

    I think I'd pluralize 'reminder' to 'reminders', since it reads like there's more than one reminder. Otherwise, it's correct.

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    Re: I was relentlessly mocked by failure

    Bizarre. I'm quite sure I've answered this question already. Have you posted this question more than once, kuben123? If so, please don't do it again.

    I recall pointing out last time that I would say "... buckled under the pressure".
    Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.

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