Stephanie Hime Pham
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Hello everyone, I am sorry if I make a mistake. According to the rules I read, it didn't mention a person is not allowed to post 2 topics all at once. This is my essay I write myself. I am new to TOEFL. I have just watched some videos on advice. Nonetheless, my essay is still rough and dry. I would be grateful if someone helped. I have posted 2 because the topics I chose are insitinctive different in the ways of expressing opinions. The way we express in the two topics are not the same (Like: First, they like , ...." ). 
Thanks in advance.
Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able.
The world is changing in a extremely rapid pace. The society is not the same as it was before. Parents have to work hard to make profits for their children’s education. But many people express their opinion by saying that children should have a period of time of freedom; they should be permitted to play around all day and not required to do household chores to fully enjoy their childhood when they can in spite the fact the their parents have to use up all the strength to make a living for the families. From my point of view, children need to take small responsibility of assisting in doing much housework for 2 reasons.
First, in this way, children will partly help their fathers and mothers save their strength or money. If they help in cleaning house, doing the laundry , parents will not have to spend money hiering helpers to do the tasks or parents will not even need to keep on working at home after their long day at work.
Second, helping with household chores slightly helps a child turn into a much more mature person. If they help with the household chores, they may comprehend a bit that their parents have been working very and very hard to provide them with good education and life filled with happiness and love.
To sum up, children should be asked to do housework as soon as they are afford to. Doing household chores might be small things but they help children to obtain the opportunity of becoming mature and understanding what their mothers and fathers have been doing to make a living. And so that, they will cherish their families. In addition, I think this message should be spread to many other places in order to make the world the best place to live in.
Thanks in advance
.Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able.
The world is changing in a extremely rapid pace. The society is not the same as it was before. Parents have to work hard to make profits for their children’s education. But many people express their opinion by saying that children should have a period of time of freedom; they should be permitted to play around all day and not required to do household chores to fully enjoy their childhood when they can in spite the fact the their parents have to use up all the strength to make a living for the families. From my point of view, children need to take small responsibility of assisting in doing much housework for 2 reasons.
First, in this way, children will partly help their fathers and mothers save their strength or money. If they help in cleaning house, doing the laundry , parents will not have to spend money hiering helpers to do the tasks or parents will not even need to keep on working at home after their long day at work.
Second, helping with household chores slightly helps a child turn into a much more mature person. If they help with the household chores, they may comprehend a bit that their parents have been working very and very hard to provide them with good education and life filled with happiness and love.
To sum up, children should be asked to do housework as soon as they are afford to. Doing household chores might be small things but they help children to obtain the opportunity of becoming mature and understanding what their mothers and fathers have been doing to make a living. And so that, they will cherish their families. In addition, I think this message should be spread to many other places in order to make the world the best place to live in.
