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    Help with formal email

    Hi guys. So I basically received an offer from a university and they've sent me an email welcoming me. is this a good reply:
    Dear Madam ....,
    I would really like to start off/commence by showing you the appreciation ou deserve by thanking you for such a great-welcoming email; this only proves how this university is cooperative with its students. I it a pleasure to have received an offer from this university. I am already counting down the days to starting my programme and I am eagerly looking forward to being a part of this university.
    thank you in advance,
    best wishes,
    Last edited by AlicioKO; 28-May-2015 at 15:14.

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    Re: Help with formal email

    I think your letter is overdone. All is needed is just a simple reply.

    Dear Sir/Madam

    Acceptance of Offer of a Place in xxxx Course

    Thank you very much for your letter of acceptance into the xxx programme.

    I wish to confirm acceptance of the offer and am eagerly looking forward to starting the course.

    not a teacher

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    Re: Help with formal email

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    not a teacher
    This should be at the top of the post.
    Otherwise, it may be confusing to the OP, and could potentially be taken as part of the reply!

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