Help with formal email

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AlicioKO

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Hi guys. So I basically received an offer from a university and they've sent me an email welcoming me. is this a good reply:
Dear Madam ....,
I would really like to start off/commence by showing you the appreciation ou deserve by thanking you for such a great-welcoming email; this only proves how this university is cooperative with its students. I it a pleasure to have received an offer from this university. I am already counting down the days to starting my programme and I am eagerly looking forward to being a part of this university.
thank you in advance,
best wishes,
 
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tedmc

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I think your letter is overdone. All is needed is just a simple reply.

Dear Sir/Madam

Acceptance of Offer of a Place in xxxx Course

Thank you very much for your letter of acceptance into the xxx programme.

I wish to confirm acceptance of the offer and am eagerly looking forward to starting the course.


not a teacher
 
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