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  1. Newbie
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    have the wonder

    Hello, I'm writing a song, and I was wondering if the sentence "you have the wonder of a beautiful sunset" makes any sense. it is intended as a compliment to a female, meaning "you're as wonderful as a beautiful sunset"
    Last edited by lupo.hp; 01-Jun-2015 at 09:36.

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    Re: have the wonder

    Pretty much any lyrics can make up a song if you have the right music to go with it. Yes, what you've written is good enough.

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