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I would like to ask your help for some suggestions of my cover letter. I have been working on it for few days and now I am sure that I still don't have confidence on it. It would be great if any of you can indicate me to a better vision of the content or a better level of my English grammar, critics are really welcome as well. I hope there won't be any grammar mistakes, and the sentences will be read smoothly...what the most important thing to me is that the content won't be boring for reading..
Here is my unsolicited cover letter for an internship in a design studio.
Thank you in advance.
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Hello cccccc studio,
My name is OOXX. I’m a Taiwanese and a new graduate of ooooxxxx(school). I am writing this cover letter for an internship.
I am very interested in your design works. They give different aspects and bring out imaginations of ordinary objects. As well as the ideas create interactions between themselves and their surroundings. For example, “ooooo Lamp”, which I met it at xxx gallery, reflects a dynamic scene of its surrounding by lights. The unexpected forms of the bubble come to my attention to imagine the next coming shape. “xxxxx Light” and the recently presented work “Light Installation” give the spaces lively ambiences. Then, my favorites, “Design by Animals” and “Design by sunlight”, the idea of natural productions inspires me mostly. Everything from the nature is already a fine design, but designs interacting with the nature add values of a sustainable life style and reminds us the environment we are living in.
As a young professional, I have immersed my interests in seeking design values through doing design works and researches of new material applications, sustainable ideas, lighting, and technologies…etc. I was really glad that I had opportunities to apply my learning on designs when I did my internship in the Netherlands and my thesis projects. Moreover, the history of manufacturing and the market research are my new approaches. I believe these implementations can open the design solutions for the design field in the future.
I would be grateful if I could work in your studio to further my training and interests in learning.
My portfolio and CV are attached, or to see my works on my website: ++++++
Thank you for reading my letter and looking forward to your positive response.