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Does anyone could check the grammar of the following tense:"When the visa of foreign professionals expired,if employers don't want to retaining them,employers should consider if those professionals become informed about that and thinking to their short term and non-progress job how affected their conduct and attitudes".
Here is my attempt:
When foreign professionals' visas expire and their employers don't want to retain them, those employers should consider their employees' futures.
Remember - if you don't use correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing, anything you write will be incorrect.