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    Our company established in 2011

    Would you mind helping me to check out these below sentences? Thanks in advance.

    Our company established in 2011, we have a 2,000 square meter building of modern architecture with laboratory and offices in Zhongguancun Science Park in Beijing. Our pilot plant is located 10 km south of Gu’an town on National Highway 106, it is about an hour's drive from Beijing office. In addition, we invest almost $20 million to build a GMP factory in Dezhou, Shandong Province, it is about three hours to drive from Beijing, set off from Beijing south station and arrive in Denzhou East station in just over an hour via high-speed train with CRH. The first phase of the project is currently under construction, should be completed by the end of this year, it occupies an area of 100,000 square meters, with two dosage form manufacturing workshop, two pilot and six API manufacturing workshop, total construction area is more than 50,000 square meters.

    Since its inception, we have been the sole and reliable manufacturer and exporter of bulk drugs, drugs intermediates and speciality chemicals. We manufacture our own brands as well as under neutral labels as required by the buyers.

    Our Clear motto is satisfying the needs of our Customers.
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    Re: Our company established in 2011

    I think 'was' is missing before 'established' in the title, but I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Our company established in 2011

    Established in 2011, we have our company occupies a 2,000 square meter building of modern architecture with laboratory and offices in Zhongguancun Science Park in Beijing.

    I do not undertand the part on 'set off from Beijing' and 'arrive at another city'.
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    Re: Our company established in 2011

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    I do not undertand the part on 'set off from Beijing' and 'arrive at another city'.
    I take it to mean that it takes over an hour to travel from Beijing to Denzhou by high-speed train, but I am not a teacher.

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    Re: Our company established in 2011

    Our pilot plant is located 10 km south of Gu’an town on National Highway 106, it is about an hour's drive from Beijing office.

    In addition, we
    are investing (since the project is in progress) almost $20 million to build a GMP factory in Dezhou, Shandong Province, it is about three hours' to drive from Beijing.

    It (Dezhou) is set off from Beijing south station and arrive in Denzhou East station in just over an hour via high-speed train with CRH.

    "Set off from Beiing" and "arrive in Dengzhou" doesn't make sense in the sentence to describe the location of Dezhou.You could just say: ...Dezhou which is three hours' drive from Beijing and just over a hour ride on the high-speed train (with on the CRH?).

    What does CRH stand for?
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    Re: Our company established in 2011

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    What does CRH stand for?
    China Railway High-speed.

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    Re: Our company established in 2011

    The first phase of the project is currently under construction(,) and should be completed by the end of this year. It occupies an area of 100,000 square meters, with two dosage form manufacturing workshop, two pilot workshops and six API manufacturing workshops. Thetotal constructiongross floor area is more than 50,000 square meters.

    Since its inception, we have been the sole and reliable(1) manufacturer and exporter of bulk drugs, drugs intermediates and speciality chemicals. We manufacture our own brands as well as under neutral labels as required by the buyers.

    Our Clear motto is "satisfying the needs of our customers".

    1. What do you mean by 'sole manufacturer'? Are you the sole manufacturer in the city/province/country?
    Claiming to be reliable needs testimonies and track record and not just saying it yourself.
    2. We manufacture under neutral labels - doesn't seem right.
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    Re: Our company established in 2011

    Quote Originally Posted by tedmc View Post
    Dezhou which is three hours' drive from Beijing and just over a hour ride on the high-speed train (with on the CRH?).
    Denzhou is three hours' drive or just over an hour's ride on a CRH high-speed train from Beijing.

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    Re: Our company established in 2011

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    Denzhou is three hours' drive or just over an hour's ride on a CRH high-speed train from Beijing.

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    Notice the '...'? It was meant to be the continuation of the sentence which I didn't type out in full.
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    Re: Our company established in 2011

    Did you notice that 'a hour' had been replaced by 'an hour'?

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