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    Can this be said - I love democracy and I think communism and the North Korea are sc

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    I love democracy and I think communism and the North Korea are scary ideals.

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    Re: Can this be said - I love democracy and I think communism and the North Korea ar

    I don't think North Korea is an "ideal."

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    Re: Can this be said - I love democracy and I think communism and the North Korea ar

    I love democracy and I think communism is a scary ideal and North Korea is scary country.

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    Re: Can this be said - I love democracy and I think communism and the North Korea ar

    Communism is an ideology rather than an ideal.

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    Re: Can this be said - I love democracy and I think communism and the North Korea ar

    I love democracy and I think communism is a scary ideology and North Korea is scary country.

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    Re: Can this be said - I love democracy and I think communism and the North Korea ar

    You need an article before 'scary', but otherwise your sentence is acceptable, if a bit wordy.

    You don't really need the words 'ideology' nor 'country'. They're redundant - we already know that North Korea is a country and communism is an ideology.

    I would suggest shorting your sentence to "I love democracy, and I think communism and North Korea are scary".

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