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    in touch with you

    Are these sentences okay?

    We have not been able to get in touch with you. We called and sent you email. But your cell number is not in service and we have not received a response to our email. When you receive this letter can you call our office to book an appointment

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    Re: in touch with you

    Quote Originally Posted by thomas615 View Post
    Are these sentences okay?

    We have not been able to get in touch with you. We called and sent you email. But
    However, your cell number is not in service and we have not received a response to our email. When you receive this letter, can you call our office to book an appointment?
    Corrections noted above. You might also consider rephrasing that last sentence to something like "Please call our office to book an appointment when you receive this letter."

    That makes it a little more clear what you want, and stresses the fact that you're asking them to call.

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